Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Miracle in New Hope by Kaki Warner & a Giveaway


 Read an excerpt here!
Kaki's back! This time, with an e-novella just in time for the holidays. I can't wait to snuggle up with this book and a cup of tea. Cookies too. This e-book will be released on Dec. 11, but you can pre-order it now! Imagine, a Kaki Warner story sent straight to you on Dec. 11 without you lifting a finger! Oh, the technology!
Check out this blurb:

Amidst the snowy peaks of the Rocky Mountains in 1871, Daniel Hobart keeps to himself—a man with a hole in his heart that matches the scar on his face. But when Daniel starts having visions of a young girl crying out for help, he begins to fear that solitude may have caused him to lose his mind. Determined to find out the truth about the mysterious girl, Daniel travels into New Hope and learns that she’s the missing daughter of widow Lacy Ellis. 
After a year of heartbreak, Lacy isn’t sure what to make of Daniel’s claims of seeing her daughter. But when he sets out to find Hannah on his own, Lacy decides to join him, allowing herself one last chance to hope. And as they retrace the long-cold trail of Hannah’s disappearance, two broken people manage to take some small comfort in each other, and in the possibility of a miracle… 
So enticing! Naturally, I had to ask our author a few more questions. Welcome, Kaki! 

What exactly is a novella, and how was the writing process different for you?


A novella is a work of fiction that’s longer and more complex than a short story, and shorter than a full novel. It usually runs 15,000 to 40,000 words and often covers a shorter time span. Since most novels range from 80,000 to 130,000 words, you have to limit description, backstory, and long narration or introspection. You’ve probably heard how in a novel every scene must move the story forward? In a novella, every word must do that. You still have to introduce the setting and characters, establish a conflict, and build toward a crisis that leads to a climax and satisfying ending, but you have to do it by using fewer adjectives and adverbs, and with less extraneous dialogue and more precise description. Gads.

MIRACLE IN NEW HOPE came in just under 40,000 words, and it was a battle to keep it that short. In my full-length novels, I take a long time to develop the characters and relationships, and I also add a host of secondary characters—including the setting, which I think of as a character, too, but one that necessitates a lot of description. I had to pick my scenes carefully, make sure each drove the story where I wanted it to go, yet showed my characters in varied situations. Since MIRACLE is a Christmas novella, I also had to keep that foremost, too. Sound daunting?  It isn’t. Just start with a single event (in my case, an avalanche) and build the story from there. Try it. It’s fun.

Are there plans for more novellas?

I hope so. I had a great time writing MIRACLE. That’s not to say it was easy—it still had to have all the elements needed to create a good story and compelling characters—but it was a nice break for me, and certainly taught me discipline. But right now I’m contracted for three more Heartbreak Creek novels, and a short story for an anthology, so I’m pretty busy. That said, I’ve long thought it would be great fun to go back for a Christmas visit with the Wilkins clan. We’ll see.

Which characters or scenes did you particularly enjoy writing in this new story?

I love these characters, especially Daniel, the hero. Here’s a man who has lost everything—his family, his looks, his purpose. He’s content to live the rest of his life as a recluse, making furniture for rich folks, and talking with his loyal companions, a hound and an escape-artist horse. Don’t worry. They don’t talk back. Not really. Yet Daniel hasn’t let bitterness or loss rob him of his sense of humor and determination to do what he thinks is right, which is what leads him on a desperate search for a child lost in the Colorado Rockies. Sounds like a downer, doesn’t it—a scarred man, a grieving mother, and child who was presumed dead a year ago? But it’s not. It’s about hope, second chances, and the courage to believe in the impossible. I guarantee a tear and a giggle.

Do many of your real-life experiences find their way into your books?

Some. I’ve never been in an avalanche or tunnel explosion, thank God, but I have been within coughing distance of a forest fire, raised horses, children, dogs, lived in snowy mountains, chased cattle, watched loved ones die, and laughed a lot. But the drama and angst you find in a romance novel? Not really. I’ve had a charmed life. So I guess it’s a good thing I have a vivid imagination, right?

If you had to write a book in a completely different genre or set in a different part of the world, what would you write?

Since the settings in my books are like secondary characters, I’m reluctant to write about places I’ve never been. The American west is where my heart and imagination reside, even though I’ve lived in cities (under duress). So I’m content to write about what’s most familiar. Yet I’ve also thought it would be fun to use the historical west as a setting, but add a touch of the paranormal to it. MIRACLE has a tiny element of that in the psychic connection between Daniel and the lost child. But I’ve left it to the reader to decide if it’s something paranormal, or miraculous, or simple faith and hope at work. And no matter what my sissy daughter says, it’s not creepy.

How will you be spending your holidays? 

Lucky me! A road trip to Texas and a long visit with the prince. Oh yeah, and his parents, too.  A hot, snow-less Christmas. What a treat. No, really. We’re looking forward to it. Beats sliding around on icy roads and having to plow our steep, quarter-mile driveway all the time (or so my husband says). But we’ll sure miss the princesses, who live up here. Oh yeah, and their parents.

Readers, we would like to know how YOU will be spending your holidays? What do you have planned? Whom will you see? Two random winners will be selected on Dec. 9 to receive Miracle in New Hope for your e-reader. Please include your e-mail.
(Don't forget: if you don't have an e-reader, you can still download the free app for reading on your phone or PC.)  Congratulations to winners, Christi and Kim! Thank you to all who commented. 

Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Thankful For You & a Giveaway

I am so thankful this year for friends and readers who have taken a minute out of their day to support A Story Club! I started this blog as a way to share the great books I've read, with a few writerly thoughts along the way, and I still strive to do just that. I've even had some gracious authors give of their time and resources, answering questions and offering advice. Each of those interviews has meant so much to me.

Your comments and thoughts have blessed me, your love for reading has encouraged me, and your interest in my writing has motivated me. 

Never fear, the year is not over and I have some great interviews still in store. . .stay tuned! Subscribe by e-mail so you'll never miss a post-- or go like my Writer Facebook page, where I always announce my newest post. My page focuses on writing, reading, and fabulous authors I want you to know about, plus a few silly comments thrown in now and then. I would love to chat with you there!


As a way of saying 'thank you,' I would like to give away a collection of a few of my favorite Trader Joe's products. These will be hand-selected and shipped to one commenter (U.S. only). I'm just telling you, you'll like this-- I think I have good taste. And it's a unique, great store. 

So I would like to know: What is the best book you have read this year? What makes it the best? 
Happy Thanksgiving, everyone!
(Random drawing held on Nov. 28- please put your e-mail in your comment!)

The winner is. . .eyeballlucy! Congrats and thank you to all who gave great recommendations!

Wednesday, October 17, 2012

Minecrafting a Story: A Ten-Year-Old Writer Shares Advice

In his Free Writing time at school, my son has been crafting a story which has caused quite a stir around the fifth grade classroom.

He agreed to an interview for A Story Club. Maybe we can all get a glimpse into the creative mind of a ten-year-old. Welcome, Matthew!

So I hear you've been writing a story based on one of your favorite games, Minecraft. What exactly is this game, and why is it so popular?

Minecraft is a game about placing, destroying, and mining blocks. The goal is to mine diamonds, which are found in caves. They're very rare. Once you get them, you can make tools and armor. Then you have to kill Ender men and collect Ender pearls. You also have to go into the Nether, kill Blazes, get Blaze powder, and then craft Eye of Ender. Then you release them into the air and follow them to the stronghold. You go through the portal into the end, and fight the Ender dragon. 

Then there is also a free-play mode, where you have unlimited resources and unlimited health.

How is your story based on the game?


My story is the journal of a guy who appeared in a Minecraft world and had to survive. He invited his friends in. There is an evil guy named Herobrine, and he is trying to steal their stuff. They have to kill him. 


What made you decide to write it as a journal?

It just sounded better.

I heard that when you traded stories at school, some kids did not want to give you your notebook back.


Yea, they didn't want to stop reading it, and they were begging me to write more.

Do you think that people need to know about Minecraft in order to enjoy the story?

No, some kids did not know anything about the game and they still understood the story. I think it would make a lot more sense if you did know the game.

How much have you written?

Part 1 is complete. I've started Part 2, and there is a sequel planned.

What is your advice for other young writers?

Write about what you really like, and it will turn into a good story.

We have an excerpt! Sit back and enjoy.

(From Minecraft. . .)

Day: 13
     I've been up all ni. . .*snore . . . . . . . . .Ugh, Ugh! was the sound I awoke to. It was Herobrine! He fell for my trap. I attacked him and Rueben came running. The next thing I knew Herobrine dropped the diamond sword and ran.

Day: 14
    I've been up all night partying. I still want to kill Herobrine. Rueben had a close encounter with a Creeper last night. It was about 11:00 p.m. and he was barking at me, so I figured he wanted to kill a sheep. I let him out. About 10-20 minutes later I started to get suspicious. I went outside to see what he was doing and this is what I saw: Rueben cornered by a Creeper. I attacked the Creeper and killed him. Rueben is grounded from sheep-killing now.

Day: 15
    Today was just a normal day. I did some mining and found some coal.

Day: 16
    Guess what?! I found out how to join a multiplayer server! I'm switching to a LAN world right now! Really *click* I think I will allow 1 person in for now. A message appeared on my screen-"JoeGuy61" appeared in your world! I think I'll send him my coordinates.


Well, there you have it! Very exciting stuff. I can see why the other kids were hooked. 

What do you love about young people's stories?


Sunday, September 30, 2012

Story Tips from Vampires


It was a rare event. I was home alone on a Friday night, with the tv and Netflix to myself. Feeling the urge to get lost in something good, I happened across The Vampire Diaries. Hey, I thought, I'll just give it a try. I never did watch Twilight, and only read the first book. (Sorry, people!)  And just like that, I was hooked. By the way, there are articles out there contrasting TVD with Twilight, in case you're interested. They're quite different.
Now I have to admit that my book writing has been derailed by this drama. As soon as one episode ends on Netflix, the next one begins in 15 seconds. I have 15 seconds to listen to this eerie music and decide whether to close it or watch "just one more."
In order to justify this habit, I began to wonder what these vampires could teach me. What can I use in real life, other than knowing how to keep an original vampire dead? Surprisingly, I did find a few useful ideas.

To begin with: Every episode has a resolution of at least one problem, and then more mysteries open up. Every episode also moves the plot forward. Each one is building up to the next, which are all building up to some end. In book chapters, we need to build and keep the suspense running. Resolving now and then, to satisfy the reader-- but then starve them again to keep pages turning.


There are two vampire brothers, one "good" and one "evil." Except that later, the bad one turns good, and the good one turns bad (or does he?) The bad one begins to show a lot of "boy scout" moments that make you really like him. Plus, he's laugh-out-loud funny. We need characters like this- with faults, but boy scout actions. Make us laugh. Show a little vulnerability. It wins us over.

Klaus is the name of the villain who causes shivers. I absolutely hate him. So I studied him to figure out why. First of all, he's done BAD things like kill off almost all of his family. Secondly, he's selfish. He's bent on breaking this curse that will hurt a lot of people in the process, but will give him a ton of power. Third, he's already very powerful physically, and not much can defeat him. And last-- this is the part I can really use-- he's unpredictable. Which makes him very, very scary. You just can't tell what he'll do. However, I've now seen a tiny glimpse into his loneliness and disappointment when his plan doesn't work. So, he's vulnerable too. But this is just a ploy to see inside his bad deed-doing, and make him more three-dimensional. It's not working, Klaus. I still despise you.

The heroine is strong-willed, independent, and a little stubborn. But she's brave, and a good friend, even willing to die for those she loves.

The hero is brooding, moody (hey, he's a vampire), and self-sacrificing. He has values and lives by them. And he looks into his heroine's eyes and LISTENS to her. Sigh.

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All the supporting characters are really well-developed and have their own plot-lines and issues going on. There isn't really one of them I dislike-- they're all interesting.

Sometimes people and vampires die. But then again, in this show, sometimes they can come back. I guess in writing, you have to keep it real if you're not writing fantasy, but you can still draw on those emotions.

The setting is pretty cool-- Mystic Falls, a small town in Virginia. The town has a historical society, with "founding families" who are on a council. They're constantly throwing "Founder's Day" parties and all-school car washes, and "Miss Mystic Falls" pageants, and masquerade balls, and campfire nights, and a myriad of other community events where everyone participates. A little too ideal, but it gives great opportunities for Very Mysterious Things to happen. What opportunities can we create for our characters?

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Finally, I like the historical flashbacks. These vamps have lived a LONG time. We don't get the backstory except in bits and pieces here and there, as the characters reveal them. This should be obvious in writing.

Now if you'll excuse me, I must watch Season 3, Episode 4 before the sunrise.



Any other fans out there? They're just about to start Season 4 on tv, so pretty soon, I'll be out of episodes to watch. That's probably good news for my novel.

Monday, September 10, 2012

Reviews in 15 Words or Less

Now and then, I enjoy reading a really good memoir or non-fiction. In this blog, I have been featuring each book in its own spotlight. Not so this time. Since I adore lists, here is a lowdown of books I've read the past few years. And this is only Part 1. As a bonus, I'm including a review of each one, 15 words or less.

The Glass Castle (Jeannette Walls): Most impactful book I've read in ten years. Heartbreaking, inspiring, loved it.
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Half-Broke Horses (Jeannette Walls): Story of Walls' grandmother, told in her voice. Frontier life in Texas, worth the read.

The Firstborn Advantage (Kevin Leman): If you are a firstborn, you may feel strange how well this book pins you. 

The Birth Order Book (Kevin Leman): Same as above. Especially helpful as a parent and spouse, learning others' birth orders.

Born on a Blue Day (Daniel Tammet): Memoir of a man with Asperger's Syndrome. Eye-opening, brilliant mind. 

The Geography of Bliss: One Grump's Search for the Happiest Places in the World (Eric Weiner): Different views of happiness in various parts of the world. Entertaining, fun to read.

Escape (Carolyn Jessop): Jessop's life in the FLDS sect, abusive, horrific, makes you want to scream. She escapes.


Safe Passage (Ida Cook): Amazing tale of two sisters who rescued Jews from Nazis. Lots of opera love. Enjoyed!

Unsweetined (Jodie Sweetin): Stephanie from Full House tv show. On drugs. Lots and lots of them. Gets better. 
*I had to read this, as she was the only decent actor on that show, in my humble opinion.*

The Great Typo Hunt (Jeff Deck): Interesting trek around country to fix typos in public places. Funny. This would be fun.


What about you? Do you break out from reading fiction? What good memoirs or non-fiction have you found recently? How did they impact you? You can use more than 15 words, by the way.


Friday, August 31, 2012

Pondering the Short Story

As I sip my "Mellow Moments" tea, I am thinking of my book characters. I have a lot of them in my novel-in-progress. I don't know right now if I'm breaking any rules, but the fact is, they just keep coming to me as I write. It's likely I have way too many, and I'll probably be told someday to shave the numbers. But I can't kill any of them off before they've had a chance to shine. We all come across numerous people as we go about our day. Really, sit and count. Surprising, isn't it?

This week, I happened upon this blurb: "Write short stories. Fail faster." Hmm, interesting. But then- nah, I'm not really into short stories. But what does that mean? I'm working on a novel, forget it. Wait- I like doing things faster. Don't like to fail. But-- Stories? Love 'em. Short? Less commitment. Maybe there's something to this, but not for me. Or is there?
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While I pondered this for a couple of days, I realized there is a lot I still don't know about my characters. So I listed all of them, marked the ones who were minor characters, then wrote a question I had about their past life. The entire page swarmed of short stories begging to be written. One character told me something interesting about his past, which I transcribed in one evening. . . *I know non-writers think it weird when writers talk this way, but there really isn't a better way to describe it*  After this, I was intrigued. I was hooked. I found the source of the blurb and bought the book in order to learn more about the craft of writing the short story.

I began to have this thought that just maybe, by writing the characters' stories, it could improve my novel. Of course, it would give me an amazing amount of writing practice. Just possibly, I could then share them with readers- if that time becomes right. How fun would it be to get a glimpse of these guys, then come across them in a novel and realize that you know why they just did what they did-- even if the other characters don't.  

It's also possible these stories won't be seen until after the novel. I liked the premise of "Fail Faster" because it's true-- it does feel pretty good to get a piece of writing finished and shined to a polish. The failing part just means that it's out there, floundering on its own, and has a good chance of rejection. But, something learned now can mean more success later.

By the way, did I mention that I love my characters? I'm having so much fun figuring out what happened to them before they came to be in my story. I hope I get to introduce them to you very soon.

What about you? Do you have any thoughts on short stories? Do you read or write them? What do you like/not like about them?

Sunday, August 19, 2012

Triple Giveaway and Q/A with Lori Lansens

The Summer blog series is coming to an end. . .it's a little sad. . .but in this Triple Giveaway, I'm sure you'll find something great to read. That has been my hope all along-- to introduce sublime authors and their masterpieces. So I'm happy to bring you Author Lori Lansens, and three wonderful stories, starting with The Girls.

This is a fictional autobiography of conjoined twins, Rose and Ruby Darlen. They are twenty-nine years old at the book's beginning, and are joined "by a spot the size of a bread plate" on the sides of their heads. Rose is compelled to write their life story, and figures they can finish it by Christmas (seven months away). Ruby is also expected to contribute chapters, and the girls have said they won't read what the other has written. The book is written with the chapters changing between Rose's and Ruby's portrayals of the events in their life. 
It was very hard to believe this book was fictional. The details and the characters are just so real, and the reader feels every joy and trial they go through- the mark of a wonderful book.

Rush Home Road was Lansens' debut novel. It is a powerful story of Addy Shadd, an elderly black woman whose world is turned upside down when five-year-old Sharla Cody, abused and neglected, shows up on her doorstep. Sharla has been abandoned by a mother who takes off for the summer, and is not as sweet and easy to care for as Addy originally thought. However, they develop a deep bond that also helps Addy work through many of her past heartbreaks. Addy was born in Rusholme, a town in southwestern Ontario, settled by fugitive slaves in the mid-1800's. Addy longs to return someday, but she has had a hard life. The author does not gloss over many of the hardships both Sharla and Addy have experienced, so readers, take this into consideration. It is well worth it to make it through the themes of hate, love, and forgiveness.

The third novel I want to share with you is The Wife's Tale. Although I liked each of these books, I'd have to choose this story as my favorite. Mary Gooch's husband, Jimmy, fails to return home on the eve of their twenty-fifth anniversary. Throughout the day, Mary processes what has happened, and remains in denial that he may have left her. She thinks back over her life, and all the ways in which being obese since the age of nine has affected her. She has settled into an inert lifestyle, unhealthy in most ways, disappointments causing her to wear "a path from the bedroom to the refrigerator." Once she accepts his disappearance, she is shaken out of her comfortable life in Leaford, Ontario, to begin a journey to California to find him. Through the journey, she ultimately transforms herself into a person no longer dragged down by weight physicallly, which also changes her fears and habits into confidence. She finds relationships, and she finds herself. I loved reading Mary's story-- it is like the ultimate makeover. 

The author, Lori Lansens, agreed to answer a few of my questions!
How did you decide to write that first book?
I had known the characters of Addy Shadd and Sharla Cody in Rush Home Road for as long as I can remember. The book is set in the landscape of my youth in southwestern Ontario. When another artistic venture went astray my husband encouraged me to write the story I had been imagining for so many years.

Where did you get the ideas for these novels, and how are they connected?
I don’t get ideas for books so much as I get characters. The characters always come first. The characters sprang from my hometown and my youth in Rush Home Road. The characters of Rose and Ruby in the girls grew out of my preoccupation with early motherhood. (I felt physically bound to my children - that was the jumping off place.) Mary Gooch in The Wife’s Tale is a character that I’d written about in different guises. I am preoccupied by the relationship of women and weight.

What kind of feedback from readers have you enjoyed most?
I get messages from my website about all of the books and each has been a favorite. I suppose it depends on the reader.

What do you hope readers will take from these stories?
I enjoys novels that move me. I also enjoy stories that provoke me to shift my perspective.

Do you have any more novels in the works?
Working on my fourth book now but I don’t like to talk about work in progress.

What do you like to do when you are not writing?
I have two children ages 10 and 12. My husband works long hours and is often out of town for weeks at a time. Does that answer your question? :)

What advice do you have for new writers?
Edit.


Well said, Lori! Thanks to the author, I have A SIGNED COPY OF EACH BOOK to give away! Please let me know either 1) If you're a writer, do you get ideas first, or characters? How does it work for you? OR 2) If you're a reader, let me know which one of these stories you'd like to read most. Any particular reason?

Find out more about the author at her website. A random drawing will be held 8/26 (US/Canada only).

Congrats to Quilt Lady, .ambre., and Lisa P for each winning a book! You will be contacted for mailing details. Thanks for participating.